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Thursday, June 21, 2018

My 5 word story

Hi blog i am going to be sharing my work with you i  done this week.
bye

5 comments:

  1. i really like your work it reminds me of how i did my one but i did more maybe you should take away the (my story)

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  2. Hi Karson I really like how you used really nice words. It reminded me when I done my 5 word story. Maybe next time you could read before you post because you wrote when he was in the building. From Semisi

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  3. loseli semisi you are good at commenting but please use more detail from your old class captain

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  4. good work ka pai incredibility add more detail and use capitals.
    from your old class captain

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  5. Hi my name is Clinton and i am from papakura central school
    i loved your story but was the tile spost to be 5 sentence because you did more like 5 sentence's than 5 words
    bye and from clinton

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