Hi Karson I really like how you used really nice words. It reminded me when I done my 5 word story. Maybe next time you could read before you post because you wrote when he was in the building. From Semisi
Hi my name is Clinton and i am from papakura central school i loved your story but was the tile spost to be 5 sentence because you did more like 5 sentence's than 5 words bye and from clinton
i really like your work it reminds me of how i did my one but i did more maybe you should take away the (my story)
ReplyDeleteHi Karson I really like how you used really nice words. It reminded me when I done my 5 word story. Maybe next time you could read before you post because you wrote when he was in the building. From Semisi
ReplyDeleteloseli semisi you are good at commenting but please use more detail from your old class captain
ReplyDeletegood work ka pai incredibility add more detail and use capitals.
ReplyDeletefrom your old class captain
Hi my name is Clinton and i am from papakura central school
ReplyDeletei loved your story but was the tile spost to be 5 sentence because you did more like 5 sentence's than 5 words
bye and from clinton